I gave you a low score on both originality and effort, because you used Ejay. It's impossible to create an original song in Ejay and it also isn't very hard to create a song in Ejay. The song isn't very diverse either, so I gave it a 5 on diversite. Clarity doesn't count, since it's impossible to create unclear music in Ejay (unless you deliberately edit it to be unclear).
Next time, try creating a more original song by using different software and creating your own samples.
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